Dear Prudence.
__________________________________________________ __________

I had my eyes shut.
And now the world's forever darker.
A boundless black.
Not like the hue of my past.

For what you did,
Has left me numb.
As all I do is relive and relive.
Until I'm physically done.

If I did deserve it.
With hectic and habitué habits,
So excessive and unfit.
My lifestyle has been unfairly fixed.

Sadness turns to shame.
Slowly morphing into helplessness.
Every time I hear your name.
And I'm done with feeling like this.

My eyes sting during the day,
Resisting the reality of regression.
With the same songs on replay,
I'm done with this depression.


Please feel that you have won,
I'll play the victim and silent witness.
Because I'm done with what you did.

Done.

This gets deep and emotional fairly quick and there's a lot someone could relate to.

My eyes sting during the day,
Resisting the reality of regression.
With the same songs on replay,
I'm done with this depression.


This and the one before were my favorite lines. Good read thank you.

Heya Lulu, it's been a long time. I liked this though, I could feel the words and they really resonated with me. I've been in that boat before, so seeing it there put eloquently? I found it to be utterly captivating.

Sadness turns to shame.
Slowly morphing into helplessness.
Every time I hear your name.
And I'm done with feeling like this.

At the above, damn. You've always impressed me with your writing and you continue to do so.

Damn Lu... I liked that a lot. Both the parts that clok & Bishop quoted sum up my favorite part, especially the bit clok picked out... I think a lot of people like to drown themselves in negative emotion when they're feeling down, if only to feel like someone(the artist they're listening to) feels the same... This was a great piece Lu, enjoyed the read.

wow... i really liked this and i got kind of emotional after reading it. Recent events piled on top of each other helps me relate. Every situation, every heart break, every loss. Takes not only a piece of your heart but your personality as well...Makes me want to reevaluate the kind of people I love.

<3