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Sup yaw >_>

Shout out to Shogun aka Black Cream Allah for recommending the beat...always ♥ bro [777]

Wanted to go for the smooth, mid-90's classic feel...hopefully my intentions were executed precisely

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YouTube - Soopa - Sike!

CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW? Version lol: Soopa - Sike! (Can You Hear Me Now?)

Opinions? hot or not? :/

Listen to the Divshare if the youtube is too low v_v

classic shit right here

Chorus is nice, fits deep with the beat. The beat is definitely dope as well. I gotta say that part there is put together SO well. That's top quality music there.

BUT your presence on the 1st verse was weak. I felt like you were drowned out on the beat, and it ruined it cos you did everything else on it well but it was just that i had to concentrate to hear it. It's partly because of volume i think, but the real problem is that you just didn't add conviction to that verse imo. I think you needed to come in on that with a steady, strong delivery. Not like your overpowering the beat, but like you got command of it, that gives it a contrast with the softer tones of the chorus. But you came in softer than the chorus imo.

2nd verse is more like what i expected though. You delivered that verse pretty well.

Lyrics and flow were standard sharp.

Salam

scratch the singin'

Appreciate it fam...you stay coming thru with some left field feed lol

I intended it to be a calm laid back flow but I guess I made it a little bit too calm

Seems to be a problem I have regarding mic approach/emotion/things of that nature...

Gotta prac...

Good look

Naw doggy...I like vocalizing <_<

Yeah, but i think that's the hardest thing. Is for me anyway. But when you get it right, you have everything to be a perfect MC.

The lyrics are there in your head, it's natural. Flow naturally comes and progresses and develops.
But delviery and presence takes WORK to get right.

My friend once got pissed off with me cos i recorded 20 takes of a verse, none of them had slips in flow or anything i just didn't like the way i approached certain words.

and lol i know i keep coming with the mad abstract feed but i probably got more experience performing than a lot of heads here.

Salam

another classic... you sounded like a lil 50 mixed with drake

I ♥ that chorus so much. You sound great on this. I'm putting it on my iTouch.

Appreciate the detailed input fam...

I try to do everything in 1 take >_>

Guess I gotta be more productive recording wise? ._.

MW...

Got Abe in here again! ♥ @_@

he sound like soopa yahdidamean